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Night Train - Ambient Mechanics
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Here's another track from my "Retro" album, called "Night Train".


.mp3   Night Train.mp3 (Size: 19.58 MB / Downloads: 23)
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#2
This track has potential, sounds are very good.

What I find not so good, that no variations exist in the drums and even too many repetitions.

If you want, you can even upload the individual tracks, maybe get one of user a remix
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(15-03-2016, 10:55 PM)Bam link Wrote:This track has potential, sounds are very good.

What I find not so good, that no variations exist in the drums and even too many repetitions.

If you want, you can even upload the individual tracks, maybe get one of user a remix

Thanks..but, no..I don't want.  Grins
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#4
Every musician has a mental picture, before going to work on a track....
Some things, Bam, did saying - I´ll second that....some variance on the arrangement,
eventually some harmony variations/ leave/adding sounds and the song gets more exciting
But i like the sequence works and some of the background sounds - all in all a
good track....if you change some little things, it only can get better  :-)
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(16-03-2016, 06:09 PM)Kujaschi link Wrote:Every musician has a mental picture, before going to work on a track....
Some things, Bam, did saying - I´ll second that....some variance on the arrangement,
eventually some harmony variations/ leave/adding sounds and the song gets more exciting
But i like the sequence works and some of the background sounds - all in all a
good track....if you change some little things, it only can get better  :-)

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Thanks again, guys, for the feedback..and I hope my reply to Bam didn't make me come across as being a smartass..I just meant I think I can learn best by mixing it myself, as it's my own work after all and I, if anyone, should know where best to take it.

One thing I do want to stress is you need to keep this track in context..along with the others tracks on the Retro album..and that's they are meant to be retro in style and production by design..so I wasn't really trying to meet the exacting standards of modern production, if you understand what I mean.

Anyway, I do agree it could be polished up some, which is something I intend doing at some point..a total remixing of that album in fact, but not for a while yet.

Still, my thanks once again for the thoughts and advice on this..really appreciate it.  Smiley_emoticons_thumbs1
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Smilie_op_007 I Like the driving drums and the dark industrial atmosphere, but I would replace the Lead-Synth Sounds - for me it doesn't really fit.  Grins
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(17-03-2016, 01:14 PM)Elemental Child Wrote: Smilie_op_007 I Like the driving drums and the dark industrial atmosphere, but I would replace the Lead-Synth Sounds - for me it doesn't really fit.  Grins

I honestly hope you get to see this, as it's been a very long time since you took the time to post your thoughts on this track of mine..and I respond..really bad manners on my part, so my sincerely apologize for that! Sorry

Thanks for the feedback and comments..really appreciated! Smilie_op_007
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#9
I fixed the player
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(29-05-2020, 11:33 PM)Bam Wrote: I fixed the player
 

That might explain why the portal now looks like this:
 
 
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And while you're fixing that, can you PLEASE disable 'embedly' it's driving me nuts!

[EDIT] Sorted! https://music-society.de/showthread.php?tid=7180

Thanks Bam.
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